Really good concept Geoffrey. But, in my humble opinion, I reckon you should, sort of, describe the ‘beauty’ and the ‘size’ of Gaia, rather than stating it outright. I’m sure You’ve done it in English at MHS, you know, using metaphors and similes, and whilst it seems like useless crap in the lesson, it really is useful in writing. It sounds cliched, but it really helps increase the descriptive saturation of a piece of writing.
Really good concept Geoffrey. But, in my humble opinion, I reckon you should, sort of, describe the ‘beauty’ and the ‘size’ of Gaia, rather than stating it outright. I’m sure You’ve done it in English at MHS, you know, using metaphors and similes, and whilst it seems like useless crap in the lesson, it really is useful in writing. It sounds cliched, but it really helps increase the descriptive saturation of a piece of writing.
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